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Although the actions were taken to avoid another inflation crisis, the decision did not thrill Germans as they solved neither the issues of unemployment or poverty, as well as lowered their income. During The Great Depression, the Nazis fully exploited the effect it took upon people by having an explanation or promise to every problem. They offered employment and food if elected, blamed the Weimar Republic, Treaty of Versailles, Jews for the Depression and promised to destroy “the enemy within” who was destroying Germany. Germans needed someone to blame and Hitler provided it. Hitler’s powerful and moving speeches appeared to represent strong, decisive leadership and guidance which was exactly what the German people needed after years under the “failed” Weimar Republic.